In retrospect, I definitely wrote it too quickly and was burnt out from writing by then. I should have stepped back and just let it come to me...kinda like how Somewhere in Between and Tales from an Ice Cube had. Anyway, I've got a prologue and first chapter done, but it remains untitled.
As always, I'll use my LJ for comments and crticisms about this fic. You all will be my beta readers--if you're interested anyway.
2010 will be the year I finish with this series....